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  1. A Sketch

    uploaded by Peter on 8/20/2010

  2. 7.22.10

    uploaded by Luke on 7/22/2010

Comments

  1. i like that structure wayyy better

    by Luke on 8/21/2010

  2. What if the end of this recording was the verse? I think that would sound pretty tight. Maybe the 'verse' in this recording could be a short bridge. The song could be a simple verse/chorus thing with a short bridge and done. Kill the intro and the monotony.

    by Peter on 8/18/2010

  3. i think i was a little harsh that night, but there are definitely cool parts. the song should not start with the main riff, that contributes a lot to the monotony. there has to be a better way to introduce the idea or rhythm without playing it over and over. the ending is bomb.com

    by Luke on 8/17/2010

  4. I like it. But yes, it needs more, that's all. Just a couple more chords, I can hear them in my head. I think the vocals sound good, just need another chord there two give that one a break. The whole song is the same thing. Sounds good though, sweet concept. You guy are gonna make it big some day mark my words.

    by Paul on 8/13/2010

  5. there are some really good parts here but im seeing luke's point, it gets a bit monotonous. also, sorry about the vocals. i think one thing we could do is make this into a post-robot-esque ditty. short and driving but its over before you know it. the other option is to give this baby a complete overhaul and make it un-monotonous (or polytonous).

    by Bruce on 8/13/2010

  6. The ending of this recording sounds awesome (I guess that's the bridge). I think we need to rework the verse's to sound more verse-like.

    by Peter on 7/28/2010